OTS Animatic

Ace animatic-Large from Cal Ives-Keeler on Vimeo.

We can improve by including a wider variety of camera angles, as most angles we use are mid shots. We could include more camera angles by using close ups of particular details for example, a close up of Elliott's cigarette as it is a typical convention of film noir. 
As we took the pictures in school the location isn't a typical convention of film noir, to improve we could of filmed in the city at night.